for literacy, we had to write about what we would be like in the future and I hope this is my life in 10 years. For my DLO I used google docs. It was fun imagining my life in 10 years. What do you think you will be like in 10 years? Please tell me in the comments
Hi, I’m Camryn and these are my two dogs Bookie jr and Sharkie jr. They are named after my old
childhood dogs. I live in a good-sized apartment across from the beachfront. Write now I’m on break
from uni. I’m studying to be a heart surgeon but as a side job I work at a horse riding school that’s open
when I’m off uni, I used to ride them as a kid. I always used to hate papaia as a kid now I love them.
Most days my dogs and I go for walks around the beach and go for a swim once a week.
They get washed after they swim and they get dog roll and pellets for dinner if they are lucky they get
some leftovers. I moved out about 2 years ago but every Sunday my brothers and my parents and I all
meat up at my parent’s place and let all our pets play as we have lunch and catch up.
childhood dogs. I live in a good-sized apartment across from the beachfront. Write now I’m on break
from uni. I’m studying to be a heart surgeon but as a side job I work at a horse riding school that’s open
when I’m off uni, I used to ride them as a kid. I always used to hate papaia as a kid now I love them.
Most days my dogs and I go for walks around the beach and go for a swim once a week.
They get washed after they swim and they get dog roll and pellets for dinner if they are lucky they get
some leftovers. I moved out about 2 years ago but every Sunday my brothers and my parents and I all
meat up at my parent’s place and let all our pets play as we have lunch and catch up.
By Camryn the 10-year-old
Hi Camryn
ReplyDeleteGreat post! I can imagine you living by the beach with your dogs. Sounds like a really nice life! My life in 10 years will see me as a leadership coach (I hope), still living where I am living (because I am where I want to be and that is in the city). I miss seeing your smiling face on road patrol Camryn! Have a nice weekend, oh and remember to check your post for capital letters :) Mrs Pascoe
Hi Camryn, Fabulous writing. I can totally picture you living your life like this in 10 years! Have a go at putting your writing into paragraphs as it will add more structure.
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