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Wednesday, August 28, 2019
No more school uniform!
For writing, we had to do some persuasive writing. I chose why we should stop wearing school uniforms for my topic. Do you think we should stop wearing school uniforms? Please tell me in the comments. I found it was quite hard to explain my ideas but after a while, I think I came up with a really good argument.
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hi camryn i thing your rigth about no school uniform its just eveyone looks the same evey day.i thing eveyone should wear their own uiform.
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