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Monday, April 20, 2020

walking trough the woods

For this task, we were asked to write a story about walking through the woods. We were able to choose our character and if we would like to write it in the first or third person. can you guess what my character is before you read it? Please tell me your guess in the comments.


One day I decided to go get my brother for his birthday but he was arriving
at the train station which was a walk through the woods. I stood up brushed
my fur and went out. I could smell the pine needles in my feet and I could
hear the birds tweet. As I headed to the train tracks I saw the smoke over
the trees and started running I got to the train just in time to see my
brother come home for his birthday and we were all a happy bunny family

The End 
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 21, 2020 at 12:34 PM

    Hi Camryn, I love the way you have set out your blog post by including your introduction. I think that you are a bunny!

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  2. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 2:10 PM

    Hi Camryn, I loved how you did this task. At first I thought you were a fox! Maybe next time you could use some more capital letters, full stops, exclamation marks etc, I loved how your title showed us exactly what you are writing about! Daisy xx

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  3. AnonymousMay 29, 2020 at 12:23 PM

    Hello Camryn. I have no idea what the character is in the story.And do you actually have a brother? Cause I have a sister. my favourite bit was when you headed down to the train stop cause I love trains. Remember a full stop at the stop of a sentence. Other than that good job.

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