Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
my half fake story about my mum
It was a bright sunny day and Michelle (my mum) went outside with her bike. She started riding through the forest then she heard a crash and looked over the corner of her shoulder. Then she saw a small space pod and a familiar face inside. She turned back around and then realized the had been sucked into the movie E.T. she ran and helped the little alien and took her back to her house. She remembers that E.T. was hidden in the closet so no one would see him and that what she did a couple of days went past then she realized that she was nearing the end of the movie so she played the rest of the movie out and hopped that she would go back to her normal life after the movie ended. Once it did she was warped back to where she was when she found E.T. and the spacecraft was gone and she realized no time had passed but she still had the memories.
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Well done Camryn, great writing. Remember to check for capital letters in your writing but also your blog post.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Camryn, what a clever piece of writing about your Mum ending up in the E.T movie! It sounds like the sort of thing that happens in a dream, great job.
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