Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 27, 2020
The Strutting Long Neck
For today's task, I chose to describe a giraffe from the short story the diving giraffe. For my D.L.O I used google slides. It was hard to think of some topics to describe the giraffe but I asked for help and got some more ideas and finished strong. I added a photo of the giraffe I was using on the second slide. If you haven't seen the diving giraffe here is the link to the story. Have you done any descriptive writing lately? Please tell me in the comments.
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Hi Camryn
ReplyDeleteDid you know i also did this story for my writing?
i really liked that you added a story which was really cool
Well done!( Angelica)